2008-10-17

My first "poems" in English and then the story goes back where it started from

I do repeat myself quite often. As some of you know I started this blog with a Mary and me story last Spring. Originally I wrote it in fifteen chapters about 12 months ago. When I wrote it I did not have any experience in writing in English.

As I now have studied some creative writing, I shall rewrite those original fifteen chapters here. This is not because there are some new readers but because there are no readers at all.

At my writing course I was forced to write a couple of haikus as well, my first "poems" in English. To give you some examples what a stinking writer I still am, here they are.


First a tradional one:


A bird is singing.

Squirrels are playing wildly.

A dark cloud gets nearer.



Then a modern one:


Nothing much to say.

Trying to write another.

Cannot do it right.



Right after this Mary and me stories go on again...

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